domingo, 20 de enero de 2008

Mistakes Composition 4: Biography

These are some of your mistakes in the last composition.

Let's correct them for Monday 28 January 2008.

(No olvideis poner vuestro nombre en el comentario)

ESSAY 3

1. Chalize Theron borned in Benoni.
2. She dancing job in New York.
3. She maked very famous films how "Monster".
4. Luis XVI died guillotined in Paris.
5. In New York a job is dancing and to moved to Los Angeles.
6. He played the 1998 a 2001 in River Plate.
7. The Charlize's films are: "That things you do" and "Monster".
8. She born in Benoni.
9.She realize very movies.
10. From six years and to 13 her joined a boarding school.
11. She approved te exam of school of Bellas Artes.
12. Alejandro Sanz touches the guitar, piano.
13. Alejandro Sanz has got a girl (Manuela).
14. She never thinked that happen this.
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ESSAY 4
1. Essay of Fernando Alonso.
2. From small he knew that his future will be the motoring.
3. Most important films of his career are Batman, Ed Wood, and Big Fish.
4. Although there have been many players good at the football...
5. Also played with the Argentina selection.
6. He is a follower of Boca, in whom also played.
7. He have different nicknames in the music world.
8. He always dreamed that was an player of baseball.
9. Beethoven born in Germany.
10. Alejandro Sanz sings very good.
11. Orlando Bloom was born in Canterbury the day 13th of January of 1977.
12. With 10 years, it did his first painting.

12 comentarios:

Anónimo dijo...

1)Charlize Theron born in Benoni.
2)Her job is dancing in New York
3)She make famous film like "Monster"
4)In Paris,Luis xvi died guillotined in the

Anónimo dijo...

ESSAY 3

1. Charlize Theron borned in Benoni.
2.She worked as a dancer in New York
3. She made very famous films how “Monster”.
4. Luis XVI died beheaded in Paris.
5. In New York found a job of dancer and moved to Los Angeles.
6. He played since 1998 until 2001 in River Plate.
7. Some films that made Charlize were: “That things you do” and “Monster”.
8. She borned in Benoni.
9. She made many films.
10. From six years she joined a boarding school.
11. She approved the exam of the school of Bellas Artes.
12. Alejandro Sanz plays the guitar and the piano.
13. Alejandro Sanz has got a girlfriend his name is Manuela.
14. She never thought that this will happen.


ESSAY 4

1.An essay about Fernando Alonso.
2. Since small he knew that his future will be the motoring.
3. The film most important of Batman was Ed Wood and Big Fish.
4. Althought there are many good players of football…
5. Also he played with the Argentina selection.
6. He is a follower of Boca, with the that also played.
7. He have differents nicknames in the music world.
8. He always dreamt that he was a player of baseball.
9. Betthoven borned in Germany.
10. Alejandro Sanz sings very good.
11. Orlando Bloom borned in Canterbury the day 13th of January of 1977.
12. With 10 years old, he did his first painting.

Rocío Martín Díaz; 1ºBach. A dijo...
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Rocío Martín Díaz; 1º Bach. A dijo...

ESSAY 3

1. Charlize Theron borned in Benoni.
2.She worked as a dancer in New York
3. She made very famous films how “Monster”.
4. Luis XVI died beheaded in Paris.
5. In New York found a job of dancer and moved to Los Angeles.
6. He played since 1998 until 2001 in River Plate.
7. Some films that made Charlize were: “That things you do” and “Monster”.
8. She borned in Benoni.
9. She made many films.
10. From six years she joined a boarding school.
11. She approved the exam of the school of Bellas Artes.
12. Alejandro Sanz plays the guitar and the piano.
13. Alejandro Sanz has got a girlfriend his name is Manuela.
14. She never thought that this will happen.


ESSAY 4

1.An essay about Fernando Alonso.
2. Since small he knew that his future will be the motoring.
3. The film most important of Batman was Ed Wood and Big Fish.
4. Althought there are many good players of football…
5. Also he played with the Argentina selection.
6. He is a follower of Boca, with the that also played.
7. He have differents nicknames in the music world.
8. He always dreamt that he was a player of baseball.
9. Betthoven borned in Germany.
10. Alejandro Sanz sings very good.
11. Orlando Bloom borned in Canterbury the day 13th of January of 1977.
12. With 10 years old, he did his first painting.

ADRIÁN VILLATE LÓPEZ-CEPERO, 1º BACHILLERATO A dijo...

ESSAY 3
1.Charlize Theron was born in Benoni, Africa.
2. She was dancer in New York.
3. Monster is her most famous film but there are many others.
4. In Paris, Luis XVI died in the gallow.
5. Many people move to Los Angeles to dance.
6. He played in River Plate from 1998 to 2001.
7. Charlize Theron's filmography: "That things you do", "Monster" and many others.
8. He is from Benoni, Australia.
9. She played many films.
10. In her childhood she studied in a boarding school.
11.She passed fine art's degree.
12. Alejandro Sanz plays guitar and piano.
13.Alejandro Sanz has a daughter called Manuela.
14. She never thought that it would happen.

ESSAY 4
1. My essay deals with Fernando Alonso.
2. Since he was a child, he knew that his future would be the motorcyclism.
3.The most important films of his career are Batman, Ed Wood and Big Fish.
4. Although there are many football players...
5. He also played with Argentine's team.
6. He is a Boca's fan, where he also played .
7. He has differents nicknames in the music world.
8. He always dreamed to became a basketball player.
9. Beethoven was born in Germany.
10. Alejandro Sanz sings fine.
11. Orlando Bloom was born 13th January, in 1977 (Canterbury, England).
12. With only ten years he made his first painting.

rocío Garrido Rodríguez 1ºbach a dijo...

ESSAY 3
1.Charlize Theron was born in Benoni.
2.she was dancing job in New York.
3.she made very famous films how ´´Monster``
4.Luis XVI died in Paris guillotined
5.In New York worked dancing and moved to Los Angeles.
6.She played in River Plate since 1998 to 2001
7.The films Charlize Theron are:´´That things you do`` and ´´Monster``
8.she was born in benoni
9.She made very films.
10.From sixt to thirteen years joined the school.
11.she approved exam of school of Bellas Artes.
12.Alejandro Sanz plays guitar and piano.
13.Alejandro Sanz had a girl who was name d Manuela.
14.She never thought that this happen.

ESSAY 4
1.My essay of Fernando Alonso
2.Since childhood he know that his future World be the engine.
3.The films most important are Batman , Ed Wood and Big fish.
4.Although there were many good players in football….
5.He also played with the selection Argentina.
6.He is a follower of Boca,the team also played
7.He has different nicknames im the musis World.
8.He always dreamed that it would be a baseball player.
9.Beethoben was born in Germany.
10.Alejandro Sanz sings very well
11.Orlando Bloom was born in Canterbury on january 13,1977
12.For 10 years, he made his first painting

manoli dijo...

ESSAY 3

1. Charlize Theron was born in Benoni.
2. His first dancing job in New York.
3. She maked very famous films his Monster.
4. Luis XVI died in the guillotine in Paris.
5. In New York a first job is dancing and to moved to Los Angeles.
6. He played since 1998 to 2001 in River Plate.
7. His movies are: That things yor do and Monster.
8. She was born in Benoni.
9. She realize many movies.
10. Since six years and to 13 her joined a boarding school.
11. She approved the exam of school of Bellas Artes.
12. Alejandro Sanz touches the guitar and the piano.
13. Alejandro Sanz has a daughter, Manuela.
14. She never thinked that happened this will happen.

ESSAY 4.

1. Essay of Fernando Alonso.
2. Since small he knew that his future will be the motoring.
3. The most important films of his Career are Batman, Ed Wood and Big Fish.
4. Although there very players good at the football...
5. Although they played with the Argentina Selection.
6. He is a to follow of Boca, in where also played.
7. He have differents nicknames in the music world.
8. He always dreamed that is played of baseball.
9. Beethoven was born in Germany.
10. Alejandro Sanz singing very good.
11. Orlando Bloom was born in Canterbury, the 13th of january of 1977.
12. With 10 years, he did his first painting.

Jose Maria"xopo" dijo...

1.Charlize Theron born in Benoni
2.she work a dance in New York
3.she made very famous how "monster"
4.Luis XVI guillotined died in Paris
5.in New York work dancing and moved to Los Angeles
6.He play the River since 1998 to 2001
7.
8.born in Benoni
9.she made many films
10.
11.
12.Alejandro Sanz plays the guitar and the piano
13.Alejandro Sanz has a daugther, manuela
14.she never thought that it happenned.



ESSAY 4

1.essay about Fernando Alonso.
2.when was small he knew that this future will be the motoring
3.the most films importat is Batman, Ed Wood and Big fish
4.Althought there are many good players of football…
5.also played the Argentina selection.
6.
7.he have differents names in the music world
8.
9.born in Germany
10.Alejandro Sanz sing very well
11.born in Canterbury the day 13th of january of 1977
12.With 10 years old, he did his first painting.

Carlos Rico Fernández/1ª bachillerato A dijo...

ESSAY 3

1.Charlize Theron was born in Benoni.
2.She dancing in New York.
3.She did a famous film "Monster".
4.Luis 16 died in the guillotine in Paris.
5.In New York she job dancing and to moved to The Angels.
6.He played for 1998 and 2001 in River Plate.
7.The Charlize´s film "That things you do" and "Monster".
8.She was born in Benoni.
9.She was realised very movies.
10.For 6 and 13 years her joined a boarding school.
11.She passed the exam in school of Fine Arts.
12.Alejandro Sanz touch piano and guitar.
13.Alejandro Sanz has got a daughter,Manuela.
14.She never think that happens this.

ESSAY 4

1.Essay on Fernando Alonso.
2.Fom small he knew that his future will the motoring.
3.The most important films of his career are Batman, Ed Good and Big Fish.
4.Although there have been many good players at the football...
5.Also played with the Argentine Selection.
6.He is a play of Boca,in whom also played.
7.He has different nicknames in the music world.
8.He always dreamt that was an player of baseball.
9.Beethoven was born in Germany.
10.Alejandro Sanz ton sing very good.
11.Orlando Bloom was bornin Canterbury in the 13th day of January of 1997.
12.With 10 years, he did his first painting.

Anónimo dijo...

El sevillafc es el mejor y tu lo sabes.
Apuébame a mi y a mis amigos menos adrían

Anónimo dijo...

ESSAY 3
1)Charlize Theron born in benoni
2)She job in New York
3)She maked very famous films
4)Luis XV1 died guillotinaed in Paris
5)I worked a job is dancing in New York i went to los Angeles
6)He played the 1998 at 2001 in the River Plate
7)The Charlize's famous films are"that things you do "and "monsters"
8)She bor in benoni
9)She realised very movies
10)Her joined a boarding school from six years at 13 years
11)She to pass the exam of school the belles artes
12)Alejandro Sanz to play the guitar and piano
13)Alejandro Sanz has got a girl(Manuela)
14)She never think that happened this

fatima parrilla carrasco 1ºbachillerato A dijo...

ESSAY

1.charlize theron born in benoni
2.she job dance in New York
3.
4.Luis xvi died guillotin in Paris
5.in New York a job dance and move to Los Angeles
6.he played since 1998a 2001 in river plate
7.
8.she borned in benoni
9.she realize very move
10.since the six yearslate 13 her joined a boarding school
11.she passed the exam of school of Bellas Artes
12.Alejandro Sanz play the guitar and piano
13.Alejandro Sanz has got a baby (Manuela)
14.she never thought that happend this


ESSAY 4

1.this essay is about Fernando Alonso
2.since small he knew that his future will be motorbikes
3.the films most important of his career are batman,ed wood and big fish
4.
5.also he plated with argentina selection
6.he is a follower of boca, in the boca also played
7.he have different name in the music worl
8.he always dream that was playing of baseball
9.Bethoven born on germany
10.Alejandro Sanz very good sing
11.Orlando Bloom born in Cantebury,the day 13th of january of 1997
12.with 10 years he painted his first painting