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1.The culture of my Spanish.
1.The culture of my Spanish.
-Spanish culture.
2. The typicals foods in Spanish is the gazpacho.
2. The typicals foods in Spanish is the gazpacho.
-A typical food in Spain is the "gazpacho".
3. In the Feria, the people singing and dancing.
3. In the Feria, the people singing and dancing.
- At the fair, people sing and dance.
4.That's why our culture like to many people.
- That's why many people likes our culture.
4.That's why our culture like to many people.
- That's why many people likes our culture.
5. The party much famouse are the fair and the better fair of Sevilla.
- The most famous celebration is the fair, and the best is the April fair in Seville.
- The most famous celebration is the fair, and the best is the April fair in Seville.
6. In the fairs in the morning the mens riding the horse.
- At the fair, men ride horses in the morning.
- At the fair, men ride horses in the morning.
7. For the childrens have got a tree whit attraction.
- There is a street with attractions for the children.
- There is a street with attractions for the children.
8. Hi, I speaking a cultures spanish.
- My essay deals with Spanish Culture.
- My essay deals with Spanish Culture.
9. A typical spanish, tradition is the bulls.
- A typical Spanish tradition is bullfighting.
- A typical Spanish tradition is bullfighting.
10. The Christmas in Spanih is very similary a the Christmas celebrated in the world.
- Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas celebrated in the world.
- Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas celebrated in the world.
11. In the day of the magic king, the family make gifts to the boys and girls.
- On Boxing Day, the family gives presents to the children.
- On Boxing Day, the family gives presents to the children.
12. The Christmas is the festival filled of love.
- Christmas is a festival filled with love.
- Christmas is a festival filled with love.
13. It 24th December to praise the birth of "Jesus Baby" and the familys see for dinner.
- On December 24, the families meet to have dinner together and praise for the birth of Jesus Christ.
- On December 24, the families meet to have dinner together and praise for the birth of Jesus Christ.
14. The day 5th Jenuary, to give present us, because are the "Kings Magians".
- On Boxing Day, the "Three Wise Men" bring presents to the children.
- On Boxing Day, the "Three Wise Men" bring presents to the children.
15. The gazpacho is a magnificent food that littles countries having.
- Gazpacho is a great food that few countries have.
- Gazpacho is a great food that few countries have.
16. Doñana is a natural zone very important in the world.
-Doñana is a very important natural zone.
-Doñana is a very important natural zone.
17. The fair April the Seville carry since the 1850.
- The April Fair in Seville started in 1850.
- The April Fair in Seville started in 1850.
18. The people will eat differents specials foods, for instance:cordero, mariscos, jamón.
- People eat different types of food, for instance: lamb, seafood, and ham.
- People eat different types of food, for instance: lamb, seafood, and ham.
19. In the "Reyes Magos Day", my family give present between they we.
- On Boxing Day, my family gives presents to each other.
- On Boxing Day, my family gives presents to each other.
20.The after day every people go to work and at school.
- The day after everybody goes to work and to school.
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11-In the three wise men my family make grift to the boys and girls
12-The christmas is the festival in my life
13-It 24th of december celebrete the jesucrist´s birth
14-Then day 5th of January to give present
15-The could soup is a wonderful food
16-The park natural of Doñana is very important in the word
17-The fair the April of seville since de
18-The people eats different special food:lamb, shellfish and ham
19-In the three wise men
my family give present between they we
20-Aftr three wise men every people go to work and at school
1.The culture of Spain.
2. The typical food in Spain is the gazpacho.
3. In the Feria, the people sing and dance.
4.That is why our culture likes a lot of people.
5.The party that is most popular is the party of Seville.
6. In the morning In the fair the men to ride at horse.
7.We have attractions for children.
8. Hi!!, I speak in this text about the spanish culture.
9.A typical tradition in spain are bullfights.
10.Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas to be celebrated in the world.
1.The culture in Spain.
2.The typical foods in Spain is the gazpacho.
3.In the fair,the people sing and dance.
4.Why culture like to many people?
5.The very famouse go to the Seville a the better fair.
6.In the fairs the horse riding in the morning.
7.The children have got attractions.
8.Hi. I speaking about the Spanish culture.
9.The bulls are a typical spanish tradition.
10.The Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas to be celebrated in the world.
1. The culture of spain
2. The typical food is the gazpacho in spain.
3.In the fair,people sing and dance.
4.
5.The feast most famous are the fairs and the fairs is the best of seville.
6.In the fair the mens riding the horse in the morning.
7.The childrens have got attractions.
8.Hi,I am speaking of the spanish culture.
9.A typical spanish tradition are the bulls.
10.The christmas in spanish is very similary at the cristmas celebrated in the world.
1.The culture of Spain.
2. The typical food in Spain is the gazpacho.
3. In the fair, the people sing and dance.
4.That is why our culture likes a lot of people.
5.The party that is most popular is the fair of Seville.
6. In the morning In the fair the men to ride at horse.
7.We have attractions for children.
8. Hi!!, I speak in this text about the spanish culture.
9.A typical tradition in Spain is bullfights.
10.Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas to be celebrated in the world.
11. On Twelfth Night, families give presents to each others.
12. Christmas is a time full of love.
13. On 24th December, people used to celebrate the birth of Jesus and family meet to have dinner together.
14. On 5th January, people give presents to each other because is Twelfth Night
15. Gazpacho is a wonderful food that people in small countries at Andalucia use to eat
!6. Doñana is a very important Natural Space in the world.
17. Feria de Abril is open since 1850.
18. People eat some special food as lamb, seafood and cured ham.
19. On Twelfth Night, my family give presents to each other.
20. Next day everybody go to work and to school.
1.the culture os Spain
2.the typical food in spain is gazpacho
3.in the fair, the people sing and dance
4.Why culture like to many people?
5.the very famouse party is the fair and the best is the fair on seville
6.
7.
8.hi,I´m speaking a culture spain
9.a typical tradition is the bullfigth.
10.The Christmas in Spain is very similar to Christmas to be celebrated in the world.
14.- The day 5th January, to give present us, because are the three wise men.
15.- The gazpacho is a magnificent food that littles countries to have.
16.- Doñana is a natutal zone very important at the word.
17.- April fair of Seville carry since the 1850.
18.- The people eat differents specials food, for instance: cordero,marisco and jamon.
19.-In the three wismen day, my family give present to each other.
20.- The after day many people go to work an the school.
14.The day 5th january,to give present us, because are the three wise men.
15.The gaspacho is a magnificent food that little countries to have.
16.Doñana is a naturel zone very important at worl.
17. april fair of seville carry since the 1850.
18.the people eat different specials food, for instance:cordero,marisco, jamon.
19. in the three wise men day, my family give present to each other.
20. the after day many people go to work and school.
14.The day 5th Jenuary to give present us, because are Boxing Day.
15.The gazpacho is a magnificent food little contries.
16.Doñana is a natural zone very important in the Spain.
17. The April fair of Seville carry since 1850.
18.The people eat different food, for example:lamb, shellfish and ham.
19. In Boxing Day my family give present between they me.
20. After day every people go to work and to school.
14. The day 5th January, to give us gifts because are the three wise men.
15. The gazpacho is a magnificent food that small countries have.
16. Doñana is a natural zone very important at the world.
17. April fais of Seville carry since the 1850.
18. the people eat diferent specials food, for instance: cordero, marisco, jamon.
19. In the three wise men day, my family give gifts to each other.
20. The after day many people go to work and school.
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